关于信用证的商务英语，翻译，机器的别进来

Pls tell me how much you cost to amend the L/C,we accept the charge.
Pls send me the bank remittance account,I will arrange the remit tomorrow morning.

So pls immediately amend the loading date of L/C,showing "before Nov 25",also send back to me a.s.p.

评价：如果这是你要给客户的回函，中文的底稿写的不太好，使英语翻译也会显得很啰嗦。邮件联系要简洁、主次区分清晰，不要说太多废话。

建议如下：

Pls immediately amend the loading date of L/C,showing "Before Nov 25". the amending charge will be for our account,and remit to you tomorrow morning,after getting your bank account on time.

我不要分呀，分对我没有用呀。