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Last summer I spent a two-week vacation at my aunt.
She lives in a small mountain village, with a river nearby
winding its course(way) to the southeast. Early one morning,
I went swimming in the river, there
some woman were washing clothes. I found a most favourable
point. I was just about to jump into the river while there came
a cry, "Help! Help!" I looked to the direction of the cry and found that a little boy had been fallen into the river. I rushed over without a delay, jumped into the water and swam quickly towards the boy. Held on to him over the water, I struggled to
the bank. At last, the boy was saved and his parents came up and
thankful to me. 85.
76. aunt →aunt' s 77. √ 78. there → where 79. woman → women
80. while → when 81. to → in 82. 去掉been 83. 去掉a 84. Held→Holding
85. 在thankful前加were
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1. she lives改为she lived(时态错误)
2. in the small mountain village改为in a small mountain village
3. with a river winded its course改为with a river winding its course
4. early one morining改为early one morning(拼写错误)
4. some woman改为some women(单复数)
5. there came a cry,中逗号改为冒号
6. I looked on the direction改为I looked in the direction
7. had been fallen into the river改为had fallen into the river
8. I rush改为I rushed
9. swam前面加and
10. he struggled改为I struggled(逻辑主语不一致错误)

.Early one morining应该为one early morining
I was just about to jump into the river while there came a cry应该把while改为when,句型： sb be about to do sth when sth happen,
I rush over without delay jumped into the water swam quickly towards the boy 改为：I rushed over without hesitation and jumped into the water ,swinging quickly towards the boy.
Holding on to him over the water改为：i held on to him over the water
,and

1、a 删掉 vacation是不可数名词
2、lives改为lived 由Last summer可知是用一般过去式
3、woman改为women 用复数形式
4、on the direction 改为at the direction 朝着某一方向用介词at
5、been删掉 掉入河里是主动地语态，不需要用被动语态
6、rush改为rushed
7、swam前加and

有没有规定里面几个错？如果是拼写错误呢？不算的吧

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lives-lived
morining-morning
woman-women
been删除
rush-rushed
swam-前加and