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2025-03-03 04:17:01

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回答1：

这封信写得很不错了！只需略作修改，使之更显专业。【】符号内是要删除处，[ ] 内的是修改建议。

Our company has recently been receiving numerous calls and letters from the customers complaining that the double glazed windows and doors installed by our company【have】[were having] major rain leakage issues. 【In】[After] a careful investigation, we have discovered that an adhesive and welding powder called Briskfix which is used for sealing the glass is responsible for the leakage.

We are writing to reject this product and request a refund 【of money paid】since the product did not 【last for】[perform as] what Cole Inc has promised and 【it is not as】 described in the information sheet.

According to the Sales of Goods Act 1908, Cole Inc is in breach of contract as its product is not 【in a】[up to] satisfactory quality. Cole Inc is required to refund the sum 【paid】of $50,000 [paid] and 【compensates our company for】[indemnify for] the 【damage】[damages] to our long built reputation and our relationship with the customers. We also require Cole Inc to 【compensate us for】 [bear] the cost of returning this product.

We have faxed a copy of the information sheet with this letter to Cole Inc as evidence. If we do not receive any response within two weeks, we 【intend to issue a claim】[shall file a legal proceeding for reparation] against you in the Auckland District Court without further 【reference to you】[notice].

Thank you for your understanding and we look forward to hearing [from] you.

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回答2：

1.the double glazed windows and doors installed by our company. have major rain leakage issues.(have 感觉不··)
>>the double glazed windows and doors installed by our company happens to be serious leak .
2.In a careful investigation,
>>Through detailed investigation, we found that ```

3.since the product did not last for what Cole Inc has promised and it is not as described in the information sheet.（last for··）
>>since the product can not be used so long（be sustained and effective ） as what Cole Inc has promised and described in the information sheet.

4.Cole Inc is required to refund the sum paid of $50,000 and compensates our company for the damage to our long built reputation and our relationship with the customers
>>and compensate(与refund并列)

5.If we do not receive any response within two weeks, we intend to issue a claim against you in the Auckland District Court without further reference to you.
>> If we receive no response within two weeks, we would lodge a claim``
lodging a claim (索赔)

回答3：

Our company has recently been receiving numerous calls and letters from the customers complaining about the double glazed windows and doors that have major rain leakage issues installed by our company. Through a careful investigation, we have discovered that an adhesive and welding powder called Briskfix which is used for sealing the glass should be responsible for the leakage.

We are writing to reject this product and request a refund since the product did not last for what Cole Inc has promised and it is not as described as what is said in the information sheet.

According to the Sales of Goods Act 1908, Cole Inc is in breach of contract as its product is not in a satisfactory quality. Cole Inc is required to refund the sum paid of $50,000 and compensates our company for the damage of our long built reputation and our relationship with the customers. We also require Cole Inc to compensate us for the cost of returning this product.

We have faxed a copy of the information sheet with this letter to Cole Inc as an evidence. If we do not receive any response within two weeks, we intend to issue a claim against you in the Auckland District Court without further reference to you.

Thank you for your understanding and we look forward to hearing from you.
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