There are so many park and garden in it
这句park 和garden要用复数
And there are also many place of intrest in shanghai
里面place要用复数
For exanple,the bund, the Jinmso building,the Science and Technology Museam and the famous building --- Oriental Pearl TV Tower.
不用For exanple，改为such as 表示列举 也是例如
My dream is be a writer
应改为：My dream will be a writer.
你看对吗？
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