写一篇六年级英语作文要求是五十字题目是我的寒假

My winter holiday(我的寒假）
In winter holiday,usually I stayed at home and did my school work.Sometimes I help my mother do some housework or watching TV.（寒假里,我通常呆在家里做作业,有时候我会帮助妈妈干点家务或者看
看电视）
One day, I went to see my friend and we play the computer games together.My friend's mom is
very kindly and gave me many sweets and chocolates.Later we palyed the cards and laughted all the time .
（一天,我去看我朋友,我们一起玩电脑游戏.朋友的妈妈是个很热情的人,给我拿来了很多糖果和巧克力.后来我们一起玩牌,玩的很开心.）
In the new year,I wish everybody have a good health and our school more and more beautiful.
Best wishes to all of my friends!
在新的一年里,我祝愿大家身体健康,希望我们的学校越来越漂亮.
祝福我所有的朋友们!
望采纳

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