你还是拿汉语来我给你翻译好了!~
汉语意思不连贯,行文没有逻辑,但我还是忠实你的原文翻译下来了:
Today is the Spring Festival. I spent a happy day. First, we had family meals together tonight and we blessed each other. After dinner, We watched the Spring Festival Gala. I really loved that. At 11:00 , firecrackers sported. Then the excting scenes had turned on in Beijing. I really love our motherland. What is unforgettable is that I made dumplings myself.This is not my first attempt,so it is fluent. I really enjoyed the dumplings.
The Spring Festival had past, but this day is the happiest day of my holiday.I love the Spring Festival.
有啊
is 应该用was吧 因为这好象是日记,已经过去了
晕,请先该一下再拿出来,没法说,太多了,应该用过去式(动词)
如have.....
Today is the Spring Festival. I spent a happy day. Tonight we have(had) a family meals(去掉s) together, we have(made) a lot of blessings. Eaten after dinner(Ater eating the dinner), I watched the Spring Festival Gala, I really loved that. To 11:00 minutes,(?句意不明) firecrackers sports, the excitement, showing a picture, I love the(my) motherland. I personally was most impressive in the process of the dumplings, this is(was) not my first attempt,(连词?) we went off smoothly. I very carefully wrapped(wrapped carefully), Snaddon dumplings, I seem to eat very fragrant! Spring Festival on this later(??????), but this day is the happiest day of my holiday.
Today is the Spring Festival. I spent(HAD) a happy day. Tonight we have(had) family meals together, we have a lot of blessing (We blessed a lot). Eaten(删除) after dinner, I watched the Spring Festival Gala(evening), I really loved that. To 11:00 minutes(From 11:00), firecrackers sports(blest), the excitement, showing a picture, I love the motherland.(你这句话想说什么意思?) I personally was most impressive in the process of the dumplings, this is not my first attempt, we went off smoothly. I very wrapped carefully , Snaddon dumplings, I ate very fragrant! Spring Festival came this later, but this day is the happiest day of my holiday.
不如你说说看你大致想说什么,错误蛮多的。
Today is the Spring Festival. I spent a happy day. Tonight we had a family meal together, we made a lot of blessings.Ater eating the dinner,I watched the Spring Festival Gala, I really loved that. To 11:00 minutes. firecrackers sports, the excitement, showing a picture, I love my motherland. I personally was most impressive in the process of the dumplings, this was not my first attempt, we went off smoothly. I very carefully wrapped carefully, Snaddon dumplings, I seem to eat very fragrant! Spring Festival on this later, but this day is the happiest day of my holiday.
今天是春节。我度过了快乐的一天。今晚我家济济一堂吃年夜饭,我们互道祝福。饭后,我看了非常喜欢的春晚。11:00的时候,一片由鞭炮、欣喜组成的景象,我爱祖国。我个人对做饺子的过程印象十分深刻,这并不是我第一次的尝试,我们很平稳的完成了。我小心的包起、Snaddon(单词没见过...人名?)饺子,我觉得吃起来特别香!随后就是春节,但这一天是我假期里最快乐的。
注:这写的什么玩意儿...