以“我的假期”为题，用英文写一篇，60个单词左右。带翻译

My holiday
我的假期

I have a very cheerful holiday in “
我有一个令人愉快的节日”

The National Day”.
国庆”。

My parent and I went to Shanghai about nine days ago.
我的父母和我大约9天前去了上海。

We got there by plane, I think that shanghai must be a very big city, and there are a lot of tall buildings.
我们坐飞机去的,我想上海一定是一个非常大的城市,并且有很多的高楼。

First we went into the hotel named”chuang ye”.
首先我们进了酒店名叫创业。

And we saw the tall big building “Shanghai TV Tower”, at nine in the evening, we got back to the hotel.
而且我们看到高大的建筑"上海电视塔”,在晚上9点,我们回到了旅馆。

The second day, we visited Zhouzhuang.
第二天,我们参观了周庄。

It’s very beautiful and the air was good, I bought my favorite toy : weapons.
很美,空气也很好,我买了我最喜欢的玩具:武器。

I like them very much.
我非常喜欢。

Shanghai’s food tasted good.
上海的食物味道好。

Today we are very happy and tired, so we slept early in the night.
今天我们非常高兴和疲劳,所以我们早早就睡了。

The third day however, we didn’t go anywhere, we stayed in the hotel until late in the afternoon.
第三天我们什么地方都没去,我们住在旅馆,直到下午很晚。

In the evening, we came back to Tianjin by plane to.
在晚上,我们回到天津坐飞机去。

This travel was fantastic!
这次旅行太棒了!

MY Holiday
In this summer I went to HAINAN for my holidaywith my parents,and brother.HAINAN is a beautiful place.There are the beautiful scenery right temperature friendly people and dilicious food.I went to swim in the sea with my bother We enjoyed the sunshine the water of the beach.Anyhow i had a good vacation.
在这个夏季，我和我的父母亲还有我的哥哥去海南度假,海南是个好地方。那儿有漂亮的风景，适宜的温度友好的人们美味的食物等等，我和我的哥哥去海里游泳，我们享受那里的阳光，海水和沙滩，无论如何我度过很好的假期。