How to give full play to the management characteristic of the city commercial bank, (此处加and) how to grab (此处删除the) market opportunity and avoid risk, (删除that,改为which)are the (content改为main contents) of this article to go deep into (discuss改为discussion). This article analyzes the development status and forecasts the development trend.
that is what this article woud like to go deep into discussion.后半句好像没错
这个主题的内容是解析目前发展的状况及预示未来的发展趋势,需要进一步的深层次讨论。希望可以帮到你,有全文吗?这样理解起来要清楚一些,不知道我有没有断章取义。