跪求一篇200字左右的英语作文 题目为my dream place ，四级左右水平，不要有语法错误，谢谢！

本人临时原创，认真看看哦 my dream place
i always dream of somewhere peaceful and beautiful,like the western countryside,it provides me with fresh air and shows me gorgeous scenary,i really enjoy feeling that way.
When i go to my dream place,i would wake up early every morning to do farm work, enjoying feeding the chicks and ducks.I would go and wake my husband up to make breakfast with me and we could have morning dessert together and share our plans for this day.thats how my daily life begins.
As the holiday comes ,which means i dont need to do farm work any more and could rest for some days,I would go sightseeing nearby with my husband,i think we would go fishing mostly ,for the countryside is so clean and beautiful that fishes are willing to live in the pool.besides, its neccessary for me to gather flowers,then i can decarate my house with them,they look fine and smell good.
Thats how my dream place is and how I would have my everyday life when Im there,Isnt it admirable?

看看有什么不好的地方，我可以修改的哈，因为是在短时间创作的，所以肯定有很多不足，如需加字数尽管说哈，我尽力帮你哦

first place that I dream well was a pieaseant field with a pond of deer water in it .Trees made shadows over the pond and water plants grew at the deep end .On one side was another field and on the other side we looked over a gate at my best friend's house with stood at the hills .At the top of our field were more tall trees ,and at the bottom was a fast-runing stream. 　　　But in our life. no place like it .The environment was polluted by humen stream are no longer dear .There are few trees.I can't find a place like my dream place.

first place that I dream well was a pieaseant field with a pond of deer water in it .Trees made shadows over the pond and water plants grew at the deep end .On one side was another field and on the other side we looked over a gate at my best friend's house with stood at the hills .At the top of our field were more tall trees ,and at the bottom was a fast-runing stream. 　　　But in our life. no place like it .The environment was polluted by humen stream are no longer dear .There are few trees.I can't find a place like my dream place.

Haikou, known also as the 'Coconut City', is the capital of Hainan Province, China's second largest island and is also the place I want to visit. The city is the provincial administrative center of Hainan as well being the focus of the local economy, culture and transportation. Haikou stands at the northern end of Hainan Island, on the west bank of the Nandu River estuary. This river is the longest on the island and the city's name appropriately means 'Mouth of the Sea'.With the sea on three sides Haikou enjoys a long coastline that features excellent bathing beaches and sea side resorts. Holiday Beach is the most popular of these, while Xixiu Beach is where the National sailing and windsurfing teams train and hold competitions.The downtown area of the city has an excellent environment with streets lined with coconut palms. Here there are modern and convenient public transport facilities and all that is best in a tropical seaside city that is pollution free and that meets the needs of the tourist in a friendly and welcoming way.Besides its natural resources, Haikou has a number of important sites of historical interest. The Wugong Temple (The Five Official's Temple), the Tomb of Hai Rui and the Xiuying Emplacement each serve as reminders of the historical importance of Haikou.

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Haikou, known also as the 'Coconut City', is the capital of Hainan Province, China's second largest island and is also the place I want to visit. The city is the provincial administrative center of Hainan as well being the focus of the local economy, culture and transportation. Haikou stands at the northern end of Hainan Island, on the west bank of the Nandu River estuary. This river is the longest on the island and the city's name appropriately means 'Mouth of the Sea'.With the sea on three sides Haikou enjoys a long coastline that features excellent bathing beaches and sea side resorts. Holiday Beach is the most popular of these, while Xixiu Beach is where the National sailing and windsurfing teams train and hold competitions.The downtown area of the city has an excellent environment with streets lined with coconut palms. Here there are modern and convenient public transport facilities and all that is best in a tropical seaside city that is pollution free and that meets the needs of the tourist in a friendly and welcoming way.Besides its natural resources, Haikou has a number of important sites of historical interest. The Wugong Temple (The Five Official's Temple), the Tomb of Hai Rui and the Xiuying Emplacement each serve as reminders of the historical importance of Haikou.

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