求一篇写给美国笔友表达感谢的英语作文 速度啊

大约80到90个字行吧~
你的要求我都做到了,你看一下,不会有很难的地方,最多就是定语从句我相信你们应该学到了,没有学到也没关系,这是基本的语感问题,用的语法和单词都是很简单的,放心~

Dear Tom:
My friendly penpal,i have received your birthday present--a nice T-shirt .I'm so glad that you gave me such a surprise!i need to say"thanks!"I enjoyed this red T-shirt do much.One of the reason is that my favourite color is red.Its really a coincidence!
And i will hold my birthday patry next week ,i have invited some of my classmates and friends to join the party.But it's a pity that you can't come here because you live so far in America.So i hope to meet you some time later.
And int the end of the letter.Thanks again~
sincerely
Your pen friend-XXX
2011.7.28

Dear Tom:
My friendly penpal,i have received your birthday present--a nice T-shirt .I'm so glad that you gave me such a surprise!i need to say"thanks!"I enjoyed this red T-shirt do much.One of the reason is that my favourite color is red.Its really a coincidence!
And i will hold my birthday patry next week ,i have invited some of my classmates and friends to join the party.But it's a pity that you can't come here because you live so far in America.So i hope to meet you some time later.
And int the end of the letter.Thanks again~
sincerely
Your pen friend-XXX

Dear Tom,

Thanks a lot for the T-Shirt, it is my best birthday gift, I really like it very much and Red is my favourite color. I will have my birthday party next week, I have asked my classmates to come my home. It is a big pity that you can not join us, I hope we could see each other some day in future.

Thanks again and with my best Regards!

Your pen friend xxxxx