急求保研面试英文自我介绍

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Good afternoon (morning), professors：
It is my great pleasure to be here. My name is mingmingzhou , graduated from Computer Science Department of Wuhan University.During my four-year study in the university as an under-graduate student, I have built up a solid foundation of professional knowledge, as well as a rich experience of social activities. I am a determined person, always willing to achieve higher goals.
What's more, I am good at analysis, with a strong sense of cooperation. All of these led me to the success of passing the first round of the entrance examination to the Master's degree. Personally, I am very humorous and easy-going, enjoying a good relationship among my classmates.
In my spare time, I like to read books regarding how to be myself and how to deal with problems. Music and movies are my favorite entertainments. As for my sport interest, I could not deny my greatest interest is football. Playing this game brings me a lot of glory, happiness and passion.
All in all, Wuhan University, with a highly qualified faculty and strong academic environment is the university I have long admired. I believe that I am a very qualified applicant for admission into your Master of IT program and can contribute to the enrichment or diversity of your university.
THANK YOU FOR YOUR ATTENTION！

你可以考虑一些像是O1S英语、ABC夫下英语、e线口语、Ekoyu口语比较.好.的学习讥构，如果是练口语的话，要自己努力大胆的多和外教说话，因为每天跟外教一对一口语对练，口语提高短期效果非常明显。尊敬的大使馆签证官： 一、我叫……，出生年月，哪里人，现在是哪里的学生（或已获学历、学位、就职单位） 二、说明出国留学的原因，说明为什么选择该国家 三、本人的学习计划 四、最后说明得到了父母的支持，承诺会好好学习，不违背该国家的法律法规 最后希望得到签证官的批准，感谢用语 属 名及日期 ，大概就这样了，呵呵