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Welcome to our school,vocational teaching centre! Now let me introduce our class. Our class in on the third floor. I am a student of the anmimal sience class. Our class has 49 students, included 11 boys and 38 girls. We are all obedient children! In class, we answer our teachers' questions positively, and we do our homework conscientiously. After class, we are very lovable students. The relationship between the teachers and we are very good. The teachers like us very much. The classmates in our class are very harmonious, just like a big and warm family!
So, welcome you to our class!

这个全部都是我自己翻译的，语法什么应该没有错误。
适当地加了一些表达感情更深的词。
如果有什么错误或者是其他的问题可以继续提问~
希望多多少少能够帮助到你一点。

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Welcome to our school, vocational education center. I am from animal science class. Here is our class in the third floor. There are 49 students in our class, 11 boys, 38 girls. We are good student. We reply our questions from teachers actively in the class, and do homework seriously. We are lovely children and we get along well with teachers. All the teachers like us. We study and play together, like a family.
Welcome to our class.

Welcome to my school, vocational center! The following is necessary to my classes, and our classroom on the third floor, I was an animal science class, a student, our class has 49 boys and 11 girls, 38. We are obedient child! In class, we are very positive answer teacher's questions seriously homework, after school we are a group of lovely students, and teachers are very harmonious relationship! Teachers are very fond of us! Students in our class are harmony, like a big family!
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