急求英语对话 关于大学生兼职5分钟

There has been a lot of discussion about should students do part time job while going to college. In my opinion, it should be considered for two stages.
One is for first and second year. The other is for third and fourth year.
While students are in first or second grade, they might want to spend more time on their dreams and making more friends. The environment would change dramatically when students first come to college.Due to the change in timetable, students would have more free time besides study. They finally get extra time working on the dreams they used to have, such as writing books, leaning dancing and so on.Also, they need to make more friends at early stage, because making more friends will help them adapt to the new place easily, and give them a good start on building your social networks for the future.It will become a lifetime benefit for sure.
During the third and fourth year, the technical courses/professional courses will come into the view.At this time students can consider to do some part time job related to their major. Schooling and work will be a complement of each other, since work will help them digest the things they learn at college, and the knowledge they learn from college will help them understand the job therefore to finish it faster.
Thus,I think if a college student wishes to do a part time job, it is better to do it when the student goes to third and fourth grade.

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