英语短文改错 拜托拜托了。急用咯。

更正在括号处注明！总共十处错误！

Western people say "Excuse me" (more) often than we Chinese. In China, "Excuse me" is only used (to apologize 或 for apologizing) when one has done something wrong or hurt someone else. Western people say (加入it) when they want to leave a party earlier, ask the way, get in a word (or) even cough during a talk. They also say "Thank you" more readily. Even (去掉if) at home the husband will thank the wife when she (gives) him a glass of water. "Thank you" means you appreciate (加入what) someone has done for you (however) small it may be. Thanks and apologies are (加入the) words westerners use every day. They can help (去掉the) people get along well with each other.

Western people say"Excuse me"MORE often than we Chinese. In China, "Excuse me" is only used to apologizE when one has done something wrong or hurt someone else.Western people say THATwhen they want to leave a party earlier, ask the way,get in a word and even cough during a talk.They also say"Thank you"more readily. Even at home the husband will thank the wife when she GIVES him a glass of water."Thank you"means you appreciate someone has done for you howEVER small it may be.Thanks and apologies are words westerners use EVERYDAY. They can help the people get along well with each other.

将very改为more
we---our
appologizing--apologize
hurt---hurts
and--- or
if---去掉
give--- gives
someone ---后加一个who
how small---no matter how small
the people---去掉the

Western people say"Excuse me"more often than we Chinese. In China, "Excuse me" is only used to apologize when one has done something wrong or hurt someone else.Western people say when they want to leave a party earlier, ask the way,get in a word or even cough during a talk.They also say"Thank you"more readily. Even if at home the husband will thank the wife when she gives him a glass of water."Thank you"means you appreciate what someone has done for you however small it may be.Thanks and apologies are words westerners use every day. They can help the people get along well with each other.

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