一段最后一句改成Now I'd like to tell you some which you might be intrested in.
二段中间We yong people去掉we，或改成the most yong people
倒数第三行去掉kind of
travel， to travel， because I can obtain knowledge from books, I believe that in this holiday I will be very happy!
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