问:The temperature will fall down when it still raining and Please pay attention to safety and keep warm. 我英语这么翻译有没有问题?
答:这样翻译比较合适哦:The temperature will drop when it rains, pay attention to safety and warmth
基本正确。但when 后应该是一个时间状语从句,句中缺谓语动词,所以应在it后加 is 。