你说我可以将来以一名转校生的身份进入XXX大学,我觉得这个理由很荒唐。如果现在不录取我,以后又能有什么理由录取我呢?我希望XXX大学成为我的母校,我喜欢它。等我老了,我会说我是XXX大学毕业的,我自豪!
Dear Mr / Miss/ Mrs/ Dr/ Professor XXX,
You said (in your letter) that I can be a transfer student entering into XXX University in the future. I think this is kind of rediculous, If I am not accepted now, for what reason that I shall be be accepted later? I have been hoping that XXX University would be my mother Uni, I love it very much. When I got old then I can tell people that I was graduated from XXX University and I shall be feeling very pround!
我从小在一个很好的读书环境里长大,上的是全市最好的幼儿园,全市最好的小学,全市最好的中学,通过我的努力又上到全市最好的高中,为什么我的大学不能延续这种好的环境?其实我还非常想进入星空社团,历史上从该社团走出去了很多名人,我很喜欢和里面的精英们一起交流。因为在中国我属于全能选手,上通天文、下知地理。
I grew up from a very good education environment, I went to the best kindergarten of the whole city, the best primary school of the whole city, the best high school of the whole city and after my striving efforts, once more, I got myself into the best senior high school of the whole city again. But why this good fortunate learning environment cannot be extended into my university life? In fact I am still longing to join the Star Club. In the past history, there were numerous of outsanding persons were from this club. I really love to mix with all the elites inside of the club, because I belong to one of China's all rounders. I am good with astronomy and I have mastered geography.
你在信上说可以给你打电话,但是我认为那样可能不太礼貌,而且可能会打扰你的生活,所以我选择的写信的方式。不知道你能不能收到,如果收不到也不要紧,我只是想发泄一下我的不满,XXX大学居然不要我,让我很失望。也许这将是你们的损失,更是我的遗憾。希望你能收到我的来信并深思熟虑。
You said in your letter that I could ring you, but I think it would be impolite. Besides, I could interrupt your daily routine. Therefore, I decided to write to you instead. I don't know whether you will recieve this or not. But it doesn't matter even if you didn't. For I am only just kind of venting my dissatisfaction. XXX Unversity had firmly turned me down! Making me so disappointed, may be this is your lost and also my regret. I would very much Hope that you will reconsider after you have recieved this letter from me.
With kind regards.
Yours Truly,
XXXX
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