可以帮我批改一下这篇英语作文吗

2024-11-03 17:51:12

推荐回答（3个）

回答1：

Should we help strangers? （即使是标题也不用每个单词都大写，你又不是专业论文）

【大写的明显是我改的】
AT A YOUNG AGE, we WERE taught to help AS MANY PEOPLE as we can, no matter HOW LITTLE DO WE KNOW THEM.

Recently, there are increasing number of people SPOKE OUT against THIS TEACHING/IDEA. Whether OR NOT we should help strangers ONCE AGAIN BECAME a question (OR BETTER YET: BECAME A DEBATE).

Some people claimed that it is always a good quality for people to help OTHERS. They INsist that if we can help each other and care for each other, we can RESOLVE with many problems by ourselves rather than RELY ON the government. Our society needs love. Everyone SHOULD not want to be LEFT alone when in trouble just because you are a stranger.

People who VOTE FOR not helpING strangers have their own reasons. Recently there are many instances about people who helpED OLD PEOPLE THEY MET ON THE STREET but WERE IN TURN SUED BY THE PEOPLE THEY HELPED. You MIGHT have a good heart (OR BETTER YET: YOUR INTENTIONS WERE GOOD), but helping strangers do have potential riskS.

As far as I am concerned, helping others is a traditional virtue. We can't give it up because of some BAD PEOPLE. If we have a warm heart and IF WE ARE sincere, we will have the power to solve the problem (WHAT PROBLEM?).

纯度很高的Chinglish，逻辑性还可以，性格和我一样，写到结论的时候就没耐心了，conclusion满分5分的话最多3分。全文满分一百的话，你自己看看我改了多少了，这要让我高中老师判的话，能55（D）就不错了。

回答2：

1. How much do you know about Holmes?
2. What did the lady hear at night? (A low whistle.)
3. Who will get the money if the lady dies? Why?
4. What did the lady and her uncle do several times? (Quarreled with each other.)
5. What did Holmes do the next day? (Paid the lady a visit.)
6. What did he find in the wall?
7. What did Holmes examine beside the lady’s bed? (The red bell rope)
8. Where was the end of the rope? (Upon the pillow.)
9. Where did the rope go? (Fastened to a nail.)
10. What was her uncle’s room like? (Little furniture.)

回答3：

如果有作文题目要求，可以比较客观的评分。例如高考作文，分五档按要点完整性，语言准确性，丰富性及逻辑性打0~5分，6~10分，11~15分，16~20分，21~25分。你先把作文题目要求发上来吧。

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