第一句不是个句子,my whole life 后面的句子是后置定语修饰前面的我的一生,也就是说,第一个句子就只有主语,缺少谓语,可以改为,I have been desired that my whole life can be treasured by others,
My whole life I've yearned is. to be treasured by people, to be put in a safe place, and carefully preserved, without being scared, feeling pain, getting lost, having no one to rely on.