请英语高手帮忙翻译，谢谢~~~

在提供翻译以前，先说说对你这段话的意见：很多地方不通顺，意思表达不明确，理解有问题。造成翻译上的困难，只能按照我的理解去翻。
1.首先，“我想我应该符合去美国读书的要求”显得太一厢情愿，改为“我准备了充分的资料，足以满足去美国读书的要求”会更实际一些。
2. “我认为父母可以给我提供经验”，请问是哪方面的经验呢？跟申请和在美国读书有关吗？如果不是，这个“经验”就太含糊，容易遭到追问。
3. 考过-- 是什么考试？我会先读语言---在国内读还是去美国读？这一段跟第4段的内容有重复。建议重新排列组合。
4.“ 美国的教育更加的自由”？-- 怎么理解？是指的方式方法吧。

下面是我的翻译，抛砖引玉。

1. I prepared sufficient data which should meet the requirements of entering the universities of the U.S.. I cherish this opportunity and hope to learn more advanced knowledge, to develop my thinking, and to realize my dreams in the future. In case I get rejected, I will keep applying.
2. My parents will support me by offering their experiences and finance which will make me going smoothly.
3. I had taken (TOFEL??) but failed to get enough score, so I will start from learning English , and pass the test as soon as possible.
4. In my opinion, the way of US education is more free for students to be more independent and more creative, which will let students show their different personality.
Due to my English is not good enough, so I'm going to learn English in the first few months to meet the requirements of beginning post-graduate study. I think in this way I can improve my English skills quicker and adapt better to the learning environment in the United States.

1, I think I should conform to the United States of America reading requirements, data are well prepared for. Because I really cherish this opportunity, hoping to learn more advanced knowledge, thinking to develop, will realize your dream. If rejected, I will continue to apply

2, I think that parents can give me experience, let me more smoothly, can you give me some money fund.

3, pass the exam, but the result is not enough, so I will read the language, study hard, as soon as possible through the school of language testing.

In 4, the United States of America education more freedom, let the students become more independent, creative, pay more attention to the different students of different personality

Because my English is not very good, so we should first learn a few months language courses, meet the requirements after beginning graduate study. This can improve their English ability, can adapt to the learning environment in the United States of america.(ˇˍˇ） 想～

1, I think I should conform to the requirements of the United States to study, material is ready. Because I cherish the opportunity, hope to learn more advanced knowledge, thinking more development, the future realize his dream. If be refused, I also will continue to apply for
2, I think that parents can offer me experience, let me more smoothly, can give me support some money.

3, pass, but did not enough, so I'll read a language well, study hard, as soon as the test through the school language.
4, American education more freedom, let the students more independent, creative, pay more attention to different students of different personality
Because my English is not very good, so will be the first to learn a few months language courses, to meet requirements later start graduate school. This can improve your English ability, will be able to adapt the learning environment.

1.I do believe that I posses all of the inquires needed in order to go abroad to America. But because I value this chance, I wish to learn more within the boundaries of my dream, so that even if I am rejected, I shall have the confidence to apply again.

2.I wish my parents would give me some advice, pave down my path to glory, and can supply me wish the tuition I need.

3. I have already applied once before, but, as my oral skills were quite shallow, got only the words of encouragement from a judge. So now, I vow to learn and pass my oral exam.

4. American education gives freedom and more space for creative development for the students, so I shall study oral English and begin to do research on other formats of English. This way, I can improve my English skills as well as begin to get use to living in America.

还有啊，我认为你交这个上去效果不会太好。。。。sorry.......别扁我。：（

1.I think I should conform to the United States of America reading requirements, data are well prepared for. Because I really cherish this opportunity, hoping to learn more advanced knowledge, thinking to develop, will realize your dream. If rejected, I will continue to apply
2, I think that parents can give me experience, let me more smoothly, can you give me some money fund.3, pass the exam, but the result is not enough, so I will read the language, study hard, as soon as possible through the school of language testing.
In 4, the United States of America education more freedom, let the students become more independent, creative, pay more attention to the different students of different personality
Because my English is not very good, so we should first learn a few months language courses, meet the requirements after beginning graduate study. This can improve their English ability, can adapt to the learning environment in the United States of america.