请帮忙用英语翻译一下这篇作文。初中英语！谢谢了！！！

In my opinion, a goal should be set in order to succeed. Then work hard to improve oneself continuously so as to come close to the success. The lazy one will not be successful.
Perseverance is also needed. Strive after the goal persistently. Rome wasn't built in a day. Only if one works hard continuously, one can meet his goal.
Only diligence, effort and perseverance can lead to great success and meet one's goal.
完全按你写的翻译的，但感觉有些句子重复了。可以自己修改下。

In my opinion, if you want to be successful .First of all, you should set up your goal,and then ,you should improve yourself by studying hard .so that you can get more closer to success. As a matter of fact that the lazy one won't be succeed in doing anything.
What's more,you should be absord in what you are doing and go on working to your aim.
That's a saying that ，"Rome was built in a day".Thus only keeping on working hard ,can you get your goal.only being diligent, working hard ,persevering can you be the most successful，
with the end of gain your aim.
我自己翻译的，希望对你有所帮助

I think the first target to be successful. And hard to learn to constantly improve themselves so that they are away from the more recent success. Lazy people are not successful.
Also have persistent perseverance. Continue to struggle toward the goal. Rome was not built in a day. Therefore, only the persistent effort to achieve their goals.
Only hard work, effort and perseverance in order to achieve the greatest success, achieve their goals.

I think that to be successful first to determine a goal. Then diligent study to continuously improve yourself, let oneself from more recent success. The lazy man will not be successful.
Have the unremitting persistence. Toward target struggles unceasingly. Rome is not built in a day. So only the unremitting efforts, to achieve their goals.
Only hard work, effort and persistence to maximize success, and achieve their goals.